Gallery + Critique

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Metallicjet
9 posts

01 Jan 2006
hey guys, this is my FIRST ANIMATION EVER, first time i ever tried it also, so id like as much feedback as possible, im listening for as much crit as possible so i can improve thanks..

http://www.zippyvideos.com/615295493295 ... ple_match/]a_simple_match.avi
Franklyn
553 posts

01 Jan 2006
its nice the motion is nice and smooth but i dont understand how he hit him :S and the whole matrix thing that you did doesnt really fit .
Global
1,589 posts

01 Jan 2006
"Downloads are Temporarily disabled in my area"...
Metallicjet
9 posts

02 Jan 2006
aww man, oh well, u shouldnt expect anything good out of my animation, lol, email me if it still doesnt work, and ill email it to ya
troubadour
207 posts

03 Jan 2006
thats a good start for a first one...
but the movement of his feet does not really fit to him...
he's running but his feet seems to be fixed to the ground by some kind of magnet, which he's fighting against...
does that make sence? hope you understand what i mean
David Holy
302 posts

04 Jan 2006
Metallicjet
9 posts

04 Jan 2006
haha, i like doing my own imaginary animations, even though tyson, is like GOD animator
kilroy
787 posts

05 Jan 2006
Hell not bad at all.

I love it