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2d Still + Animation
potrait attempt
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choyuki 10 posts06 May 2008Hey there. This'll be my first forum post.
After tons of linearts and CGing, I'm starting to draw realistic potraits.
Comments and critiques are welcomed.
ops sorry bout the greenish tinge in the image
I haven't find out about the correct scanner settings for penciled arts -
06 May 2008hey, Welcome aboard, what a nice way to come in here with such a nice drawing... have you been drawing a lot before this?
portraits are a really hard thing to do! so congrats for what you acheived!
you probably know all this, but here are a few things i saw on your drawings:
1. would be somewhat of ideal tight curve to start from...
2. is a rounder jaw line, having a square jaw like the one you made is very masculin, while a rounder/smoother jaw line is more feminin
it's not because you draw portraits, that you should forget about perspective!
if you look at the nose, you can see it's sightly out of angle and don't get me wrong, because that nose is very well drawn, but rotating it a bit to the left could help.
where are your construction lines?
You should alway, and by that i mean ALWAYS strart with theses to get the persp/proportions right. Otherwise you get caught up with detail straight away and in the end, it doesn't always look the way you want it too...
hope this helps
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06 May 2008Great critique man, that's a big help for the rest of us too. =)
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choyuki 10 posts06 May 2008
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts06 May 2008 -
choyuki 10 posts06 May 2008
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choyuki 10 posts18 May 2008thank you guys >W<
my new potrait of my sis XD
for her bday [forgot to buy gift -_-"]
i did use constructionlines and lines for perspective in this one
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choyuki 10 posts18 May 2008ops. XD the left eye should be shorter X.x
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts19 May 2008well i guess the begen san genes run in the family ^_^, great i like it, but i am no expert but i think the nose and mouth and chin they are not matching up.
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choyuki 10 posts20 May 2008mahmoud>>nose , mouth and chin not matching up?
-draws imaginary line connecting them withmouse-
mmm.. so far that i know of, they are in line
maybe the flatness and barely visible nose bridge made u think that -tilts head-
but it's family gene ><
mouth>> i got the lip shape right but i'm not good at drawing teeth @.@
i'll do better next time -
Zahra 83 posts04 Jun 2008Really nice works choyuki!! Such an awesome things u've pointed Richard! WoW!
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