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Zahra 83 posts04 Jan 2008Hi!
I've made a walk cycle in Flash with tablet and just wanted to know your idea about that FRIENDS!
C&cs are really welcome!
12fps
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Zahra 83 posts06 Jan 2008EWWWW.... There it no comment yet!!!! No problem thank u only for watching it, as always c &cs are welcome, u can attack me with your crits! sorry if I said something wrong because of my English, n I don't know why I can't see my signature, I always make mistakes!!!!:-(
cheers!
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07 Jan 2008Don't worry man! Sometimes it takes a few days to get responses. I like your cycle a lot. There's not a whole lot I would critique on it from my point of view. It's a pretty basic solid cycle, works well. I like you layered over the clothing and bag, etc. which worked really well. The only thing I'd say could use a little help would be the girls head has kind of a weird swagger to it. With a vanilla walk like that her head probably wouldn't be swaying as much as it is. But that's all up to artist's interpretation so whatever. =) Nice work!
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08 Jan 2008Hey Zahra....sorry for not commenting earlier :O...I love the way you documented the full process of animating the character....makes me want to get back to some 2d animation
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08 Jan 2008i like it. I got Flash when I upgraded my Adobe bundle, and I'd love to be able to do something like that in it! I really liked this. I liked the way her hair bobbed, and her eyes and mouth. They kind of all bobbed with her steps. that's great, makes her seem like a very happy character.
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Zahra 83 posts09 Jan 2008I am really grateful because of your comments mates!
And I shoudld say I am hasty n rash always indeed, u r right JayG!
n Yessss! I,m agree with what u said about her head!
And Tyson n hype for your kind words
I want to work hard!
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Zahra 83 posts16 Jan 2008Just another attempt... I'm not very happy with it but...
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19 Jan 2008Hehe that's really neat Zahra ...here are some comments:
-watch your curves....right now the motion leading up to a foot plant is nice...but when she plants either foot her body become a little jerky...it should flow smoothly along the x-axis...not flow in short, robotic bursts
-watch your arm swings....when her arm swings forward it's very linear right now....try to smooth that out so it also follows a nice arc.
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19 Jan 2008I'd also add that her UP position is very high, it's a little unnatural but it could be you wanted it that way. If that was the case, then you might notice that if you walk against a wall and try that, when you push up super high like that on your toe, the arm dragging on the wall would raise up a little too, making a sort of wave like line on the wall in red. Agreed about the arm swings, the spacing is linear, and it also swings reaaallly far. Nice job Z, 2d animation is hard as hell so I'm pretty stoked to see this stuff.
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Zahra 83 posts23 Jan 2008Hi mates! :D Just wanted to say: because of your good guidance and your comments! I'm working yet! wanna keep walking! more, more, more... and learn more n more!
Cheers!
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