Gallery + Critique

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sagargears
46 posts

08 May 2011
Hi friends.

Well finally i have finished my short film which i was working on from past two months. thanks to my friend Samik helping me out with the music. i soon will be coming up with the making as i done the whole film using the 3d medium and got to know many things. the whole film is done using 3dsmax , photoshop and Premier. don't have much to say about the film. just relax, watch and enjoy!!!

http://www.vimeo.com/23433612
sanyilajos
58 posts

17 May 2011
Nice work.
There a few things that bother me.
I the donkey , doesn't look like a donkey... for some reason i thought (despite the color) that its a cow.
Second, when he transforms, You used too many cuts of the same cameras. And third, I think the story lacks some punch, something that would make you laugh, cry, or be surprised.
ALi
608 posts

17 May 2011
Looks pretty good to me. Simple, funny and sound-fx make it more interesting. Not any specific crits. Except Sany's crit about the character, it looks more a cow. My sister agrees too. But about those cuts, they didn't bother me, At least not at the first watch. Good job anyway. Keep it up!