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Gangbanger 8 posts
Here it is so far..........
Ya I know the last pose is a little late.
http://rylanmattes.com/Jan_09_Test3.mov
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JayG 1,164 posts
Very cool blocking! It reads very well and you've got some great acting going on. Really cool work so far.
My only concern is the pose the guy is on from 104-160 with his left arm. The pose with the hand on the back of the neck is probably in the top 2 of the most cliche over-used poses ever. I remember in school a guy called out my friend for using it, claiming it was "immortalized by Baloo in Jungle Book and that he shouldn't use it." At the time I thought he was crazy and was like, who cares, until I started looking out for it and realized it really is one of the most over-used poses in history.
That being said, the blocking reads fine and it seems like it'll work out, but if you can come up with a clever alternative to that one pose without changing much you'd put yourself in a better position I think for 11SC.
/2cents.
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BColbourn 2,323 posts
the way he moves to the left around frame 40 doesnt seemed staged very well, maybe if he leaned to the right for that one or if he simply qwasnt leaning straight at the camera.
I really like the 2nd character, thought you had his acting spot-on. I also agree with jay's comment about frames 104-160.
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Gangbanger 8 posts
Thanks guys. Ya I realize the hand behind the head is cliche, but I do think it works...I still have 2 weeks left so if I think of something else I will change it.
