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Gallery + Critique
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The Factory
car anim
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16 Nov 2008Need some crits on this. nothing drastic can be changed, just some timing tweaks or whatever you guys notice. thanks in advance.
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rrateme95 262 posts16 Nov 2008Hey dude it's looking good only crits are is I think when the car goes in front of the other car, the back of it should maybe kind of swerve so it makes it seem like its going pretty fast, and also maybe when the car goes in front they could be closer to make it a bit more tense, other than that lookin good
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16 Nov 2008I have to agree on the last bit, where the car merges in... it seems too controlled, it looks like a wild gesture to overtake and yet it's performed by the stig.
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19 Nov 2008ok so i completely re-did the aniamtion today after getting ripped apart by the compositing teacher
now with improved composition and movement 
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20 Nov 2008nice, replicable movement and secondary motion.
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Gotmilk 228 posts20 Nov 2008ooh second version looks so good -
mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts20 Nov 2008very nice tracker? -
20 Nov 2008yeah the second one does look better.......but I don't get whats going on?? why did the the first that got passed go to the other lane ?
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21 Nov 2008thanks for the comments guys, the render will be done by the end of this week. about the animation, there wasnt much plot about it, just wanted something with nice movement and nice composition in the remake. the back car changes lanes for the sake of composition, haha.
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rrateme95 262 posts21 Nov 2008nice improvement! happy to see the final outcome
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25 Nov 2008here's the completed composite: http://bencolbourn.com/CSF_Final.mov
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25 Nov 2008HOLY!! the render looks AWESOME!!
the only crit is i wish it would be longer , a chase scene maybe
i demand a PLUG for this -
25 Nov 2008wow thats sweet..............I really like this one. Nice work mate.
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Gotmilk 228 posts27 Nov 2008
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts03 Dec 2008
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rrateme95 262 posts09 Dec 2008
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