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The Factory
Living room
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Daniel 103 posts03 Mar 2010Hi guys, new excercise. This time I'm trying to create a "photorealistic" scene. How can I improve this? Thanks
Maybe to overburn areas?
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04 Mar 2010hey looks good, . one material that looks weird to me is the tables right underneath the macbook, the reflections make it seem almost crystal-like. i cant really tell if its metal or glass
I'm not the biggest fan of the TOD but that's a personal thing i think
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04 Mar 2010Seems like great summer day out there
I like carpet best. It's those scary max hair and fur intelligently used that I enjoy watching.
Well, since you asked, my two cents - outside lighting is too white, seems a liitle bit too bright. Flowers silhouettes looks at one point sort of "washed away" by brightness of daylight. Just a little bit less brighten I think wouldn't hurt. -
Daniel 103 posts05 Mar 2010Thanks guy I'll correct theese things!
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05 Mar 2010Just a general pet peeve of mine with scenes like this in general, is that everything is too clean! Real life doesn't look like that.
I suppose if you're going for a job in architectural rendering then they don't want their renders looking normal or the slightest bit unclean...but man it's such a distraction for me looking at these images and trying to imagine a real person in there.
Things like small scrapes on the hardwood floor, fingerprints/smudges on the glass, a little dirt on the walls, a wrinkle in the carpet. If any person weighing more than 50lbs sat in those chairs, the metal legs I imagine would scrape up that floor something fierce.
All that being said, it looks really good Daniel. Lighting looks fantastic and if you touch on the other guys' notes it'll be even better. -
Daniel 103 posts11 Mar 2010Hi guys! Thanks JayG But this time I want to create a super clean scene! (last time I create the tunnel, very dirt! http://www.finallycg.com/uploads/images ... _final.jpg ) I modified some little things as you said me! Less reflection on the metal under the tables, less intensity on the light and modified other little thing.
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Daniel 103 posts15 Mar 2010Test
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Daniel 103 posts
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17 Mar 2010the feet look better now. but what i realised those edges of those small tables are just razor sharp
maybe a very very small bevel would make them look friendliern -
17 Mar 2010the reflection is much better now. but the edges of that thing look really razer sharp
maybe a small chamfer would make them look even nicer. -
Daniel 103 posts18 Mar 2010Thanks! I try to make the edges less sharp! (there is a little chamfer but it's not enough!)
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