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Gallery + Critique
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The Factory
Topology work, critiques welcome (no 56k)
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Jonathan 480 posts06 Apr 2007So I had previously been working on shape (which, I guess, I'm always working on ), but for now I'm focusing making efficient meshes and meshes that have good topological flow, so heres a number of screen caps/renders along the way. Feel free to guide me in the right direction.
One question I have, though, up front is what form do I need to UVW unwrap? Do I do that with the low poly version, or with the higher one? Though I am tempted to sculpt the face, I'd rather just it be 100% max so I can get used to all the great tools in Max. So critique away.
Now let me preface by saying after working on this a while, I was going through a huge topology thread on cgtalk, so now I see a bunch of stuff I need to tweak
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread. ... e=35&pp=15
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Jonathan 480 posts06 Apr 2007Another update
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07 Apr 2007
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07 Apr 2007Hey man,
Here are some comments after taking a look at your models:
-watch out for the height of the nose. Right now you're nose peaks in height right under the eye, where a real human nose peaks in high right near the top of the eyelid
-You've got some strange topology going on above the upper-right section of the eye. It's very blocky at the moment, whereas you probably want the loops to flow smoothly around the eyebrow
-You might want to add some loops into the lips to give them more definition. There should be a little arc near the front of the lips, but right now they're just really thick and undefined
-You've got a good base! Just keep tweaking it and it'll look fine -
Jonathan 480 posts07 Apr 2007
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