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Jake 212 posts
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zachm 1,230 posts
looks pretty good so far, I would say to model a head/face for it though and stick it out of the top. I think if you put it on the card or had it stick out of the card it might look funny and disproportionate. But that's just my two cents. other than that, i'm curious to see what you do with it.
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Richard 1,943 posts
uea, that looks good, and i would just make the arms smaller, i think they are a little too big, and the hands look a bit boxy. and i agree with zachm... but that's just my tree cents :p
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Jake 212 posts
I changed a lot of things; a new body, new feet and legs. I didn't really like the pointy shoes. I'll redo the arms/body connection, it didn't really work out all that well. Maybe I will do a face now >_>
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mahmoudnahmad 1,159 posts
intresting work i like how the flat behind blends with the upper body great work good luck cant wait to see the hole thing finished and maybe animated
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zachm 1,230 posts
I like the round boots better man. One thing that I notice though is that the legs and boots still look really square. Maybe that's an artistic preference seeing as it is a square/rectangle body, but if I were you, I would round them out a bit more, and perhaps use some sort of guide to define the shape of the legs. Also, it would be cool to see some wires!
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Cameron 2,374 posts
Tis looking pretty frickin weird. Which in my books is a big +
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Jake 212 posts
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Jake 212 posts
And update, I'm almost there, I think. Redid the arms-body connection. Added (too much) wrinkles in the boot covering, so I might fix that. He also needs some more wrinkles around his upper arms and maybe some small ones on his legs. And I'm not happy with the shoulders yet. I'm also thinking of giving him that weapon that they used in American McGee's Alice.
The wire; I'm fairly new to subdivision modelling, so it isn't the most optimized mesh, but at least it's almost all quads. Any hints, tips and tricks there would be appreciated.
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jurk_boy 64 posts
hey dude show us the refrences that u wirk with
looks kool
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whaaabamb 615 posts
I love these guys well done are you going to animate them i think you should
keep it up
