Part of a design piece for a industrial plant! Don't ask me the name of this part of the machine, I don't know, it's just the part that's closest to completion, I just need a little feedback on the appearance, e.g. too shiny, too matted, etc:
Well I think that for illustration purposes, it's prob fine, other than the blue tanks, which get a little too dark from shadows imo. But if you're going for realism, you've got a little ways to go. I think that having it on just a white background makes it kind of feel like a total wip. If I were you, i'd present it with some sort of background stuff going on, like a subtle gradient at the very least, or some sort of blueprint paper type of thing. I don't know much about the project, so that's all I can really tell you at this point. I'd consider providing a sketched look as well, like a toon line render of some sort. Just a thought.
07 Sep 2008
that render so reminds me of half life source stuff, looking good keep up